Danny, great job putting the audience into the shoes of the problem. The audience listening to this will have a better time relating to your pitch. I really like your idea for your device. It would be very helpful on campus where bikes are used everywhere. I also liked how you expanded the who as well, making it known through the pitch that this would be perfect for runners too.
Daniel your presentation is top notch. Your professionalism and preparation are perfect. I like the way you used storytelling to sell the product. Your description of the solution and the product are very detailed. After listening to your description, I kept thinking about integration for safety and possibly having it integrated with an led light or flasher. I used to bike and ride in the evening and I always wore a red strobe, so cars and people could see me. Great Job on your Pitch.
Hi Danny; I think your elevator pitch does a great job on describing your idea in a short time period. I was able to understand your business idea in the 1:28 minutes time-frame you use for delivering your pitch. Also, I find it great the choice you made of using storytelling to sell your idea – it allows the audience to stay interested throughout your whole speech. For the future, keep on improving these great aspects! Go Gators!
Danny, great job putting the audience into the shoes of the problem. The audience listening to this will have a better time relating to your pitch. I really like your idea for your device. It would be very helpful on campus where bikes are used everywhere. I also liked how you expanded the who as well, making it known through the pitch that this would be perfect for runners too.
ReplyDeleteDaniel your presentation is top notch. Your professionalism and preparation are perfect. I like the way you used storytelling to sell the product. Your description of the solution and the product are very detailed. After listening to your description, I kept thinking about integration for safety and possibly having it integrated with an led light or flasher. I used to bike and ride in the evening and I always wore a red strobe, so cars and people could see me. Great Job on your Pitch.
ReplyDeleteHi Danny;
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch does a great job on describing your idea in a short time period. I was able to understand your business idea in the 1:28 minutes time-frame you use for delivering your pitch. Also, I find it great the choice you made of using storytelling to sell your idea – it allows the audience to stay interested throughout your whole speech. For the future, keep on improving these great aspects! Go Gators!