1) Elevator Pitch 2
2) All of the feedback that I received was positive so it was difficult to discern what needed to be changed. It was important to be told that my pitch did look professional and that I nailed all the necessary points. I took a don't fix what isn't broken approach with this pitch.
3) In my new pitch I mostly just changed my pacing with the words and added an additional closing statement.
Daniel, I liked how you started with an attention grabber and allowed the audience to feel like they were in a situation where they needed your product. Good job taking feedback from last time and pacing your words and adding essential pauses for effect, as well as making it concise and straight to the point. Keep up the good work.
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